Elmore Leonard Quotes about Writing
The line of dialogue belongs to the character; the verb is the writer sticking his nose in.
Elmore Leonard (2007). “Elmore Leonard's 10 Rules of Writing”, William Morrow
Elmore Leonard (2007). “Elmore Leonard's 10 Rules of Writing”, William Morrow
"Making It Up as I Go Along". AARP The Magazine, Volume 52, No. 4A, July/August 2009.